Comments on: Son of a rich.

By: Rachel

Rachel — Sun, 30 Oct 2011 21:53:39 +0000

Beautiful and breathtaking. I want more, more, more. I ache for Evan.

By: Janet

Janet — Sun, 16 Oct 2011 02:25:37 +0000

Lovely story, very nicely written.

By: Jenn

Jenn — Sat, 15 Oct 2011 02:18:27 +0000

I don’t quite get it, but I fell in love with your characters anyway!

By: angela

angela — Sat, 15 Oct 2011 01:38:49 +0000

I can’t even say “this” is my favorite part, because so much of this clenched and unclenched my stomach. The mother, alone with her sense of loss, trying to comfort her son, who doesn’t understand the why.

I can definitely tell you the last line is going to replay itself in my head over and over. Such fabulous writing.

By: quirkyloon

quirkyloon — Fri, 14 Oct 2011 23:19:56 +0000

So intriguing! Very well-written. And here I thought it was a real life situation and I was going to ask why on earth would you steal GREEN BEANS?

heh heh

Nicely done.

By: J

Fri, 14 Oct 2011 22:17:17 +0000

You have a gift for the dark my dear friend. I don’t know where it comes from because you are pure light. Next week can we go back to the soft core lust of last week??? ;0)

By: CDG

CDG — Fri, 14 Oct 2011 19:33:16 +0000

My stomach is all tied up in angsty knots. Seriously, I’m a little ill. That’s some fine writing right there.

By: Wild Child Mama

Wild Child Mama — Fri, 14 Oct 2011 18:43:24 +0000

Such a cliff hanger! I’m intrigued and confused and sad all at the same time. Well done!

By: Missy @ Wonder, Friend

Missy @ Wonder, Friend — Fri, 14 Oct 2011 18:14:29 +0000

More, please. Those are 300 powerful words.

By: Melanie

Melanie — Fri, 14 Oct 2011 17:57:10 +0000

Wow, wow, wow. Powerful. I’m in love with the story already. I’m so intrigued – of course I want to know what happens next.
Will this story continue? I’m hoping so. Truly.